Exhaling a sigh of relief the first man, Adam cleared his mind of all thoughts. They were all just a form of betrayal designed by the lord to test the faith and obedience of the universe that the divine master had created. A small wisp of breeze blew throughout the valleys of paradise cooling off Adam's naïveté.

'This isn't a paradise; it's just a false sense of existence, without having to work for anything, a buffet of lies and deceit.'

His earth brown eyes gazed into the heavens, a seemingly endless void of blue and white puffs of clouds that made the sky. Another of God's equally beautiful creations was water. But what most fascinated Adam about the water were its inhabitants. They were unlike any land creature...these were somehow magical.

'Is existence treating you well Adam?'

'Yes Lord thank you for the blessing'

'But?' reading the thought of Adam.

'But...I feel incomplete as if something is missing.

'Yes, I understand'

'Of course you do' mumbled Adam who was starting to tire from the presence of an "all knowing" being.

The moon rose and fell as Adam dreamt of a creature that he had never seen before, it was beautiful yet somewhat strange... it was just like him. Trailing after the moon was the sun. The warmth of the energy from the sun awoke the brunette from his dormant state, along with it a new hope. Rising from the soft green he adjusted his eyes to the day. He noticed the imprint that he had left in the grass. It had taken his form quiet well, he must have slept for a long time. Glancing around paradise he saw many creatures each was special with their own shapes, scents and minds. He had seen mostly all of these creatures the previous day...except for one.

'L-Lord what is this?'

'That is Eve, the first woman.'

'Thankyou'

I like this story. More please! :)
» randomjunk on 2006-09-27 07:51:38

Hey thanks,i've only written a bit more, but it's fair length,leading to the present.
» Nrgjester on 2006-09-27 07:52:58

this is awesome
i really liked this. continue the story! oh, you are. well, DO THAT
» middaymoon on 2006-09-27 07:58:11

Ooh modules. :P
» randomjunk on 2006-09-27 10:17:44

Lol yeah finally
» Nrgjester on 2006-09-27 10:56:08

He used his sucky straw thingy to pull the frog's head off! And it was gravity because the head fell down. :P
» randomjunk on 2006-09-27 11:17:22

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